Dazed

Screaming wildly at the night
Silently my voice ripples
Only the soul feels my pain
Only the darkness sees me

Lost hunting, wondering
Prey falls before me
Lapping up the hope
Giving way to hunger

Yesterday tickles the old soul
Replaying dreams forgotten 
Lives lived a thousand times
To harvest this moment

2 responses to “Dazed”

  1. brahnamin Avatar
    brahnamin

    NICE.

    seriously, just NICE. i absolutely love the imagery throughout.

    liking the title less

    simply because the images feel so alive and aware. nothing in this poem says dazed to me. its too raw and visceral for a word that fuzzy.

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  2. writesome Avatar
    writesome

    Thanks Brahnamin. The title came before the clarity.

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