February 11, 2008

The response

By writesome

Wandering lonely, waiting for word
Feeling downhearted, faking a smile

Seeing the reason, a blow to the heart
Hoping for healing, praying for rest

Moving toward something, imagined or real
Seeing myself, embracing the child

Stealing the moment, holding it close
Winning the battle, wondering lonely

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I've been wanting to do this for a while. Now I can type instead of pen scratch in a journal. It's an experiment, but isn't life. I wish you joy and happiness. May life bless you and may you bless life. View all posts by writesome

This entry was posted on Monday, February 11th, 2008 at 11:25 pm and posted in Poetry. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed.

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2 responses to “The response”

• berlasso
  February 12th, 2008 at 10:33 pm

  Heather, First time back here since you helped me set my own blog up (with which I’ve done zip, nada, nothing)….but I so enjoyed reading your’s. There is a deep heart and tenderness in your writing and I love your humour. Thank you for sharing your work. Elizabeth

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• writesome
  February 12th, 2008 at 10:52 pm

  Thanks for dropping by Elizabeth and for your supportive words, it really means a lot to me and keeps me wanting to share more of what’s inside. This one has a bit of a story, which I will tell you about when we next meet.

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